Ghost21b's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Day of Overgrowth]

i must say

normaly i try to give tips of improve ment but i truly dont know what needs improvement congrats on stumping me lol

[When It Snows]

ok a small idea

no thing major just record yourself then drop the tone down som you know like a chop skrew i think it might improve it a tad better

larrylarrybb responds:

alright Thanks for the review!

[Remember (intro)]

i have an idea

ok loop to about 12 and keep it goin add a litle drumerboy drum beat to it just slowly fade it in though then through a lead like i know you can do it be a good jam if nothing else hope this helps

[New rock song in progress]

B-E-A-utiful

again i cant wait

nunyabizness responds:

Thanks dude. I'll work this into a song in a few weeks.

[New song....]

a masterpiece in the works

cant wait to hear the complete song

nunyabizness responds:

Thanks man....I'll be working on this as well...the beat to this is one of my faves.

[I cant breathe (with lead)]

i love it

one request though its nothing major justturn the singer up a tad more some spots to me seem to be over powered but the song is perfect

nunyabizness responds:

Thanks for the review, we're working on a slightly better mix....louder vocals and a little bit more bass....It's been updated now. So it should sound a little better.

[106 miles to Chicago]

i like it

has a good driving tone to it if you dont mind id like to download

SaxeCoburg responds:

Thank you, by all means download away! :)

[the perfect crime]

good but its still missing somthing

i like the fact you got drums in it but now you need to keep tempo as well as harmony its got it but some points go tad off beat. im only saying this because i know you got the skill im just trying to push you too your limits

[One Less Lonly Person]

great

the lead was a tad off beat a few times but i do see a lot of good in this. you do need to try and let the last part ring itself out even though i know that wasnt meant to sound that far off it gives a feeling about what happens to the charecter in the story

[a walk through hell (cove]

ok heres what i say for you

again with the soft voice. let your self go crazy try your best to lose your voice you are a hell of a guitar player. i would like to know one thing though are you doing the sock trick i told you about. plus i can tell that even though you dont have a drum kit you can still use every day items to use it i once used a comb trash can ant a few spoons and was abel to come up with somthing desent sounding for drums back ground. just a small tip from one artist to another