i like it
has a nice flow to it normaly i give ideas on how to improve peoples songs but as of right now i think this is a master peace
and its the first song where i can think of somthing up beat to flow to
i like it
has a nice flow to it normaly i give ideas on how to improve peoples songs but as of right now i think this is a master peace
and its the first song where i can think of somthing up beat to flow to
thanx! :D
try puting a sock over the mic
it helps believe it or not
and dont be afraid to shout it out you got potential but i can tell ur holding back ur voice
if i ever get a band started back again would u be interested on doing some tours with us
but first i got to survive iraq and the rest of the sand box
boredom brings out the best of people lol
i can tell yall were bored but it does remind me of my cosin vinny when hes final got back 2 his house
Hah. Nice. :3
has a slight godsmack feel
i like it maby tune the base down a step and turn the solo up a step to even it out
pluss let the bass ring
it dosent have to sell itself out the base is meant to add power to the song
but its realy good keep it up
lol
add a little echoe and it might ad a better rating but its was a great idea for bordom
im giving a 9 only because its missing that echeo
and yes i misspelled lol
good
runs smooth it seems to of skiped a beat for a sec but it smoothed back out
im not much into 50 but this works
maby fade the voice into the music a tad mo
and you might get this hit up
thanks dude. yeah it was rushed, but i liked the combination of music and voice. its not to hard to make hits like this but figureing where the parts go is key and takes a lot of time =D
love it
if you dont mind when i get back to america id like to add some guitar to this song and maby a slight bit of drums im picturing a light drummer boy sound for the drums
kind of reminds me of nightwish
the style it has i dont know why i cant help but think of that band i love your voice however. id probly describe your voice as an angels
reminds me of my lost soldiers
i would like for this song to be played at my funeral if i dont make it back to america or even after its so touching even thogh its sad there is much beauty in it
your holding back dont
its a good song but you need to let yourself free if you know what i mean... if not ill tell you
be louder use your outside voice imagine your on stage and realy need to feed your energy to them. scream it if you must but let yourself free and youll have enough fans to creat a record and sell.
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