Ghost21b's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

["I Can't Breathe" Rock Version]

much clearer

you can make her voice out so much better
every thing is rich and flows together very nicely
dont have any sudjestions now
again great song
and this time i have nothing to throw in other than keep it up
G>H>O>S>T

nunyabizness responds:

Thanks man. We'll do our best.

[-?Reworked?-]

any chance you can

throw an acustic guitar in with it its great the way it is i just wounder how it would sound with that rythum

Maverlyn responds:

If i remake this i will, because i formatted my pc a while back but forgot to save the work files :P DOH!

[Of Love And Sorrow - My G]

good

feel the bass needs to ring and the drum loop turned up a tad
leads good as is rythum id say try for an acustic feel
cant realy hear the bass though im sure if you got it turned up the same as the rythum it would blend nicely
very smooth sounding lead works great for many senarios
G.H.O.S.T

mike-cuzins responds:

thankyou for your time in this review!
I understand completely,
the problem i had was actually infact that the bass in this song was the guitar with an octaver applied, which sounded horrid, hence the low volume... i know i shouldnt settle for second best but im poor

[Dreamin demo]

is there any way i can get the lirics

i love the tone of the whole song
great guitars for a demo i can see where you could add some odds and end stuff but over all beautiful son

dariaband responds:

hello! sorry for such a long delay - we are sadly not checking NG often, but it's gonna change ;) you can find the lyrics at http://dariarock.blog.com :) - our current band site - thank you very much for the nice words !

[Put Your Lights On]

good music but

i feel you could do so much better with the voice
feel its being held back i can picture a good screaming style with this
like build it up with the voice as well as the music i know ya got it in ya

judass777 responds:

well, U put it right, there's a plenty to improve still, and yeah, i'd love 2 hear TW scream on that1.:)thx 4 rev man!

[Mordenga]

Hell yeagh

much and i mean much better that other one i knew you had it in you
keep me updated if you dont mind i like how much youve improved by not holding back keep it rocking man

G.H.O.S.T

TWojnar responds:

Heya, good to see you back! Thnx for review:)

[Anymore (In Progress)]

mabey try

a stronger piano riff for the intro it still sounds good this way too tho

nunyabizness responds:

It's a clean guitar riff, but I may try a piano with that riff so how it sounds. Thanks for the input.

[Down-Home Boogie]

i like it

has a clean feel to it dosnt seem to be any rough edges in there

ConnieB responds:

thx :D

[Rockin That Beat]

mortal kombat thru the years

sounds good

larrylarrybb responds:

Thanks!!!

[Runaway Kanye West Remix]

i like it

however once again i have to give a slight sudjestion...
try to tone down some instruments to hear the vocals better then add amore basey beat that runs smoothe. it still sounds sweat. just think this might help it sound better

larrylarrybb responds:

Thanks! and the instruments are kind of high but i usually assume that the listener already has heard the original and knows the words and would rather hear the new sounds.